Sunday, December 13, 2009

ScriptChat 12.13.09 - Logline, One Sheets, Queries - what do producers want?

#scriptchat TOPIC: Loglines, one sheets, queries...what's the best approach to attract interest of producer/agent?

Yet another wthashtag webiste fail… they stole 37 min of one of our chats, so I’m posting the chats backwards in order for you to have every bit of valuable information we tweeted.  I’ll keep trying to regain what’s lost and repost in the proper order, if possible.  But, it’s worth the effort to read.  There’s some great query information.  Scroll down to bottom and read backwards… pain, I know. @jeannevb


EURO moderator: @DreamsGrafter
American moderator: @jeannevb



American Chat End:

jeanneveillette @rachlanger thx for all the great info! Get some rest & feel better #scriptchat -9:15 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Donna_Carrick RT @karenquah: @jeannevb Cool to have so many newbiew tonight. Gotta go. xoxo #scriptchat /Night, Karen. -9:15 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeanneveillette @winsloweliot it's 8pm EST Sundays (also a EURO chat 8pm GMT Sundays... same topic) Transcripts/info www.scriptchat.blogspot.com #scriptchat -9:14 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
rachlanger @jeanneveillette Alright, time to feel better, night and thanks for another great #scriptchat! -9:14 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeanneveillette Please feel free to @ me @jeannevb w any questions or suggestions 4 future chats. Look for info via @scriptchat as well #scriptchat -9:14 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick Gotta go. Apparently the Transformers need oiling and that's my job. Must save the world. #scriptchat -9:13 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write @Spitfire_King But of course when I lived in SoCal and had the chance, I wasn't interested in screenwriting. lol #scriptchat -9:13 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
winsloweliot @jeannevb next week? what time is #scriptchat - sorry I missed it. -9:13 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeanneveillette Thank u again every1 for joining in! Have a great week & we'll chat again nxt Sunday! Hope u all learned #scriptchat -9:13 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Spitfire_King #scriptchat film making is hurry up and wait as they say, but maybe get the chance to have a coffee with the EP, lead actors or scriptwriter -9:13 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Donna_Carrick RT @jeanneveillette: One last call out to any1 who has query questions before submitting to @zacsanford , he wants GREAT #scriptchat -9:13 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeanneveillette @dawnbierschwal night, Dawn! Thx for joining in #scriptchat -9:12 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
winsloweliot @jeannevb thx for invite to #scriptchat We were watching Cary Grant Bach.&BobbySoxer - screenplay by SydneySheldon. It shows! #scriptchat -9:12 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick RT @Spitfire_King: #scriptchat I was asked to pick up the lead actress from the airport and got a chance to discuss...< Sounds neat. -9:12 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal OK, must return to the natives... they're getting restless. Great chatting tonight! Until next week... #scriptchat -9:12 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write hahaha RT @scripts2: @yeah_write - wear a mask? but you look fabulous dahlink! #scriptchat -9:12 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
quicksilverwest @Spitfire_King You are Correct! One of the Fastest ways to learn what Pros are doing: Via The Set. Pass It ON! #scriptchat -9:12 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeanneveillette @Spitfire_King very cool! Did u have to prime them w alcohol? : ) #scriptchat -9:12 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write @Spitfire_King I used to sit in on hour drama, when bf was working. So boring, lots of waiting. #scriptchat -9:11 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick RT @cowgirlwriter: @Alex_Carrick It's all fun on dark side til Dick Cheney shows up #scriptchat < I'm sure not going quail hunting with him. -9:11 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD @Alex_Carrick: and nothing is more powerful than the imagination. that's where the fun comes into play. #scriptchat -9:10 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Spitfire_King #scriptchat I was asked to pick up the lead actress from the airport and got a chance to discuss film and ideas, a rarity in the biz. -9:10 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal @yeah_write Yep.. seen those. This one is focused on efficient query submissions/responses. #scriptchat -9:10 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Spitfire_King Recap #scriptchat the best advice I got was to crew on films to see how the process after the script works, plus every1 hangs rnd the coffee -9:09 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeanneveillette One last call out to any1 who has query questions before submitting to @zacsanford bc he doesnt want sh*t, he wants GREAT #scriptchat -9:09 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeanneveillette got locked out, its me @jeannevb #scriptchat -9:09 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick RT @SissiePoohSOD < It's not so much that I know what's down there, as that I can just imagine what's down there #scriptchat -9:09 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
cowgirlwriter @Alex_Carrick It's all fun on the dark side until Dick Cheney shows up. ;) #scriptchat -9:09 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
karenquah @GoldenAgeofGeek thanks for the chat mike. haven't read your post yet. will do soon. take care! #scriptchat -9:08 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal @jeannevb Good plan. #scriptchat -9:08 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write @dawnbierschwal There are a few with webcam meetings. #scriptchat -9:08 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
quicksilverwest RT @dawnbierschwal We know how to work it! RT @jeannevb we cld do a whole night on pitchfest tips if ppl want #scriptchat [All Hail.] -9:08 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick RT @jeannevb: @Alex_Carrick so glad u've come to the dark side #scriptchat < The dark side is usually where all the fun is. Glad to be here. -9:07 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write @Spitfire_King New Twitter accounts don't seem to work well here. #scriptchat -9:07 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
karenquah @jeannevb Cool to have so many newbiew tonight. Gotta go. xoxo #scriptchat -9:07 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @dawnbierschwal we'll set a pitchfest topic up for May and Sept... before Great Am Pitchfest & Expo #scriptchat -9:07 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
alanamorales @jeannevb Cool, thanks! Will head over this week to check it out and get the trans... #scriptchat -9:07 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal @yeah_write No webcam. Just great pitching resource. #scriptchat -9:07 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD @Alex_Carrick: LOL! But that's what makes it so much fun! :) #scriptchat -9:06 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Spitfire_King My #scriptchat alter ego account doesn't seem to be appearing on the scriptchat timeline search thingy...weird -9:06 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @alanamorales i post transcripts www.scriptchat.blogspot.com I try to get it posted late Sundays but sometimes site is tech hell #scriptchat -9:06 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal We know how to work it! RT @jeannevb we cld do a whole night on pitchfest tips if ppl want. @dawnbierschwal & I r pros on that #scriptchat -9:06 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
quicksilverwest @jeannevb i believe ppl would benefit from it re: pitchfests. they're so oft overlooked #scriptchat -9:06 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write YES!! RT @jeannevb: @quicksilverwest we cld do a whole night on pitchfest tips if ppl want. @dawnbierschwal & I r pros on that #scriptchat -9:06 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
ttimechitchat plz do! RT @jeannevb: @quicksilverwest we cld do a whole night on pitchfest tips if ppl want. @dawnbierschwal & I r pros on that #scriptchat -9:05 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write @alanamorales Transcript at www.scriptchat.blogspot.com #scriptchat -9:05 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write @dawnbierschwal But I don't like the way I look on the web cam. Haha, just kidding. #scriptchat -9:05 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
ttimechitchat Totally unrelated to ~ I saw a PAA this week & thought it was a really wonderful. I highly recommend it! #scriptchat -9:05 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mckormickastley success is often achieved by those who don't know that failure is inevitable - coco chanel #scriptchat -9:05 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @quicksilverwest we cld do a whole night on pitchfest tips if ppl want. @dawnbierschwal & I r pros on that #scriptchat -9:04 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @yeah_write Enjoy the city! #scriptchat -9:04 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
alanamorales Where can we find transcripts? I was in and out tonight... #scriptchat -9:04 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick RT @SissiePoohSOD someone will be going to basement in next chapter #scriptchat < I refuse to go into basement. I know what's down there. -9:04 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal And don't forget virtualpitchfest.com in between! RT @Timsn: Good idea about pitchfests! #scriptchat -9:04 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @SKCOMEDY we were talking queries. If u have anything to add at some pt, just use hashtag : ) Or @ me & I'll add it 2 transcript #scriptchat -9:04 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write RT @cowgirlwriter: @cinemascribe Dont think thats true. Nick Schenk (Gran Torino) was living in Minneapolis, MN. #scriptchat -9:04 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
quicksilverwest @jeannevb re: pitchfests: brilliance. that is a sa-weet heads up for peeps. nice add! All Come To The Darkside! =o) #scriptchat -9:03 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write @GoldenAgeofGeek I'm going to the LA Gift Mart for a trade show. No film stuff planned. #scriptchat -9:03 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @FilmLadd maybe I need to send u a reminder nxt week? #scriptchat -9:03 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
cowgirlwriter @cinemascribe Don't think that's true. Nick Schenk (Gran Torino) was living in Minneapolis, MN. #scriptchat -9:03 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jolenejahnke RT @jeannevb: Dont forget @zacsanford's offer for queries! www.scriptchat.blogspot.com Deadline THURS #scriptchat -9:03 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick RT @jeannevb: @Alex_Carrick so glad u've come to the dark side : ) #scriptchat < I'd love it if some of my short stories were scripted. -9:03 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb To all the #scriptchat virgins who dared to jump in unprotected tonight, thx for joining! #scriptchat -9:03 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal @cinemascribe Maybe it just makes him feel better to pay the rent. : ) #scriptchat -9:03 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SKCOMEDY Sorry I missed #scriptchat. I've been sleeping all day due to the flue medications I'm taking. :( -9:03 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @AllanTMichaels thanks for joining us! #scriptchat -9:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Timsn This was a great #scriptchat Thanks! Looking forward to the next one and the transcript. -9:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
FilmLadd @jeannevb Dagnabit I always miss your #scriptchat 's -9:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
karenquah a little frantic. got to run. thanks for the chat all. As always, a pleasure. #scriptchat -9:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @CheekyWench *heehee* *slaps ur ars* #scriptchat -9:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
robertcarroll RT @rachlanger: Get your queries in to @zacsanford by this Thursday! http://bit.ly/185tzs #scriptchat. Big opportunity, a Christmas gif ... -9:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal Pitchfest Party!! RT @yeah_write: @jeannevb @dawnbierschwal and me at Pitch Fest in June! #scriptchat -9:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mindofbryan One more scene in "Walter" just about down. #scriptchat -9:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @yeah_write I'm actually spending some time with my parents in Cleveland for the the holidays. Plan to be back in Feb #scriptchat -9:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb also, remember to follow @scriptchat. I try to post info fr there too #scriptchat -9:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @Alex_Carrick so glad u've come to the dark side : ) #scriptchat -9:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD thnx 4 all your help. I really appreciate it. :) 'night, every1. :) #scriptchat -9:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
AllanTMichaels Thanks for all the advice! I'm going to go grab dinner. #scriptchat -9:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
CheekyWench ::streaks through #scriptchat:: RT @jeannevb: ok, the hour is UP, so handcuffs r off & u can run wild off topic if u'd like -9:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
cinemascribe @dawnbierschwal #scriptchat thought it was odd when j Stuart the screenwriter of Die Hard said u DO have to live in LA when i saw him -9:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Timsn Good idea about pitchfests! #scriptchat -9:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
rachlanger Get your queries in to @zacsanford by this Thursday! http://bit.ly/185tzs #scriptchat. Big opportunity, a Christmas gift for writers! -9:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write @jeannevb @dawnbierschwal and me at Pitch Fest in June! #scriptchat -9:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb I hope u all picked up at least 1 golden nugget of advice here tonight #scriptchat -9:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write @GoldenAgeofGeek I'll be in LA next month. Looking forward to a week there. #scriptchat -9:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb ok, the hour is UP, so handcuffs r off & u can run wild off topic if u'd like #scriptchat -9:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick Thanks to @jeannevb. I always have fun at these sessions and come away having learned something. #scriptchat -9:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Timsn I have a chance to volunteer at some of the film festivals in NY and NJ. Is that a good way to meet industry folks? #scriptchat -9:00 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD time 4 me 2 get going. thanks for the good tweets and info. I'm always learning something new here. #scriptchat -9:00 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jolenejahnke RT @jeannevb: Dont forget @zacsanfords offer for queries! www.scriptchat.blogspot.com Deadline THURS #scriptchat -9:00 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @dawnbierschwal & I go to pitchfests... try to go to at least 1 a yr to get in the face of producers. They remember us, 4 sure #scriptchat -9:00 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
cinemascribe RT @jeannevb: Dont' forget @zacsanford's offer for queries! www.scriptchat.blogspot.com Deadline THURS #scriptchat -9:00 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @GoldenAgeofGeek cool beans : ) #scriptchat -8:59 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb Dont' forget @zacsanford's offer for queries! www.scriptchat.blogspot.com Deadline THURS #scriptchat -8:59 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal No need to live in LA/NYC, but I do think it's important to find ways to network face to face whenever possible. #scriptchat -8:59 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @jeannevb Sure. Gimme the details after #scriptchat -8:58 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD Chicago is making a big effort 2 get more film & TV production here, which is a good thing. #scriptchat -8:58 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick RT @mindofbryan: @yeah_write I have a regular creative hangout at my house. #scriptchat < That's excellent to hear. Good for you. -8:58 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @iscamedia come to my neighborhood : ) #scriptchat -8:58 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb definitely RT @mindofbryan: @SissiePoohSOD Chicago has a lot of good connections to be had. #scriptchat -8:58 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Timsn NYC and NJ has great connections also #scriptchat -8:58 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD @mindofbryan: so I've heard. I'd love to be able to get my foot in the door. #scriptchat -8:58 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick Everybody loves a tale of redemption. It's all about the comeback. Think Rocky 10, 11 & Rocky on Mars. #scriptchat -8:58 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @GoldenAgeofGeek good idea for a future night. Wanna be the guest tweeter? : ) *hint hint* #scriptchat -8:57 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
iscamedia @jeannevb @ReneeRenegade In 20 years, never found a party environment suitable for serious disc. Contacts yes but pitches no #scriptchat -8:57 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write State of Iowa ran off all movie makers. Stupid, stupid. #scriptchat -8:57 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mindofbryan @SissiePoohSOD Chicago has a lot of good connections to be had. #scriptchat -8:57 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
rachlanger @AllanTMichaels LA and New York provide easier access, but some of us settle for Hollywood North, Vancouver Canada here. #scriptchat -8:57 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
AllanTMichaels RT @jeannevb IMO, u MAKE ur opportunities w hard work and good writing. That matters far more than where u live #scriptchat - Good advice -8:57 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb we're wrapping up the hour. Does any1 have any ?? about queries we didnt address? #scriptchat -8:57 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
ReneeRenegade RT @AllanTMichaels How necessary is it to be in LA/NY? Is anyone from ATL-- need mentor. plz DM, if serious. #scriptchat -8:57 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @jeannevb I got all of my contacts in LA #scriptchat -8:57 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mindofbryan @yeah_write I have a regular creative hangout at my house. Most weeks there's something going on. #scriptchat -8:57 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write @jeannevb Only person in movies I know is a stuntman. #scriptchat -8:56 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @jeannevb that's something else to talk about. There's querying and then there's getting contacts and small jobs #scriptchat -8:56 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick I remember the stories about great writers like William Faulkner spending time in Hollywood. He hated it. #scriptchat -8:56 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
AllanTMichaels How's the industry in DC? Will be returning full time in May. I know one producer there. But are there more? #scriptchat -8:56 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @AllanTMichaels Courtney Hunt. She wrote/directed Frozen River #scriptchat -8:56 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @AllanTMichaels IMO, u MAKE ur opportunities w hard work and good writing. That matters far more than where u live #scriptchat -8:56 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal @yeah_write Stop by on your way, girl! #scriptchat -8:55 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD I live in Chicago, so I guess I'm in a pretty good spot, then. #scriptchat -8:55 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @GoldenAgeofGeek it is a good area, for sure. I get the best of both worlds here. Privacy & access : ) #scriptchat -8:55 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick RT @GoldenAgeofGeek #scriptchat < Yes, the crazy thing is that sports films work anyway because the formula is so strong. -8:55 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
AllanTMichaels @jeannevb May I ask who the neighbor is? #scriptchat -8:55 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @dawnbierschwal Ah thanks :) #scriptchat -8:55 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write @mindofbryan As of 2010, I'll be there at least 3-4 times a year. #scriptchat -8:55 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
ttimechitchat RT @jmiewald: There are 2 differing reasons for a logline: 1, to keep you focused as a writer. 2, to sell the script to others. #scriptchat -8:54 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD @mindofbryan: sounds like a good idea. it'll be great 2 hang out with fellow writers. #scriptchat -8:54 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @jeannevb That's a good area then. Not every spot has that much industry exposure. And you really want that #scriptchat -8:54 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
quicksilverwest RT @jennevb i'm a whore at a party w my biz cards ha... but i'm not obnoxious : ) [omgosh, UNOILUVIT!] #wondertwinpowersactivate #scriptchat -8:54 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick RT @garnerhaines: Just stopping by to say hi, sorry I won't be able to stay tonight. #scriptchat < Good to see you even if only briefly. -8:54 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @AllanTMichaels I live in country upstate NY. Neighbor nom for OScar last yr best org sp... we live in middle of NOWHERE #scriptchat -8:54 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mindofbryan @yeah_write If you come through often, we could set up a hangout somewhere. #scriptchat -8:53 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @GoldenAgeofGeek I live in Upstate NY & there are TONS of film ppl here. My neighbor nominated for Oscar last yr 4 best org sp #scriptchat -8:53 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
iscamedia RT @ReneeRenegade It's a psychology game. Ask for theirs. ALWAYS ask for theirs. That way, you are in control. #scriptchat -8:53 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
rachlanger Ladies and gentlemen, my friend and yours, @garnerhaines. Thanks for stopping in! #scriptchat -8:53 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
karenquah @garnerhaines hey there. #scriptchat -8:53 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal Can't if you're unproduced. RT @PennyAsh: And how necessary is belonging to the writers guild #scriptchat -8:53 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Timsn RT @Spitfire_King: #scriptchat All screenwiters are voyuers, so we watch everything. VERY TRUE!!! -8:53 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @Alex_Carrick I'd look at the sport and first ask "what makes this sport exciting" #scriptchat -8:52 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
AllanTMichaels @GoldenAgeofGeek @jeannevb #scriptchat - haha - conflicting advice! -8:52 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @garnerhaines hey! Good to see u ;) #scriptchat -8:52 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write RT @quicksilverwest: @jeannevb re: bi z cards. if you do not pass em, how the Industry know u exist - Amen! LoL #scriptchat -8:52 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh And how necessary is belonging to the writer's guild #scriptchat -8:52 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
garnerhaines Just stopping by to say hi, sorry I won't be able to stay tonight. #scriptchat #scriptchat -8:52 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @quicksilverwest i'm a whore at a party w my biz cards ha... but i'm not obnoxious : ) #scriptchat -8:52 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD @yeah_write: really? wow. sorry I missed u. #scriptchat -8:52 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick How does one come up with original ideas for sports films? Standard formula. Early success, then failure, finally redemption #scriptchat -8:51 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @AllanTMichaels not at all. U can write anywhere. Just be prepared to go to LA to pitch or have a meeting #scriptchat -8:51 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jmiewald "X Meets Y" is the sequel to "X Meets X" #scriptchat -8:51 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @AllanTMichaels very at least until you land a manager or agent, then you can write from anywhere #scriptchat -8:51 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Spitfire_King #scriptchat All screenwiters are voyuers, so we watch everything. As for business cards, I take a bunch when I crew on films, biggest netwrk -8:51 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write @SissiePoohSOD I was just in Chicago last week. #scriptchat -8:51 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
quicksilverwest @jeannevb re: bi z cards. if you do not pass 'em, how the Industry know u exist - Amen! LoL #scriptchat -8:51 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @jmiewald fact is, it has it's uses and it's effective #scriptchat -8:51 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
AllanTMichaels How necessary is it to be in LA/NY? #scriptchat -8:50 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @bklynMF I see it on ur feed for sure.... keep talking & I'll check the wthashtag site to see if i see u #scriptchat -8:50 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jmiewald @jolenejahnke "I think we should clear up that "X meets Y" isn't the definition of a logline." < But it caught on, didn't it? :) #scriptchat -8:50 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @jolenejahnke good point, it's what your story is about in a clear, concise, entertaining way #scriptchat -8:49 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick I've gotta believe that as with most things, it's best to avoid cliches. Therefore don't want to say "x meets y" #scriptchat. -8:49 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @ReneeRenegade @iscamedia u have to take advantage of the opportunity & be able to pitch on the spot... the elevator pitch #scriptchat -8:49 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal Thank you! RT @jolenejahnke: I think we should clear up that "X meets Y" isnt the definition of a logline. #scriptchat -8:49 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
LisaFromNYC u think she'll bite lol RT @jeannevb r u pitching Jenna Jameson? haha RT @LisaFromNYC: w/ leather & nipples. @rachlanger: #scriptchat -8:49 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
AllanTMichaels RT @ReneeRenegade @iscamedia if you meet someone at a party-- is it bad form to pass out your business cards? #scriptchat -8:49 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal Not if they ask. : ) Make em want to ask. RT @iscamedia if you meet someone at a party-- is it bad form to pass out biz cards? #scriptchat -8:49 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @ReneeRenegade @iscamedia I pass out my cards. Abso-f'ing-lutely. It's all about networking. I pitched to James Schamus at party #scriptchat -8:49 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD @mindofbryan: I'd like that. :) #scriptchat -8:49 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jolenejahnke I think we should clear up that "X meets Y" isn't the definition of a logline. #scriptchat -8:48 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
ambigfoot #scriptchat you guys are a bunch of pervs talking about leather and nipples :-) -8:48 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @ReneeRenegade not usually. I'm always forgetting to bring them though #scriptchat -8:48 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mindofbryan @SissiePoohSOD Oh cool, you're a Chicagoan, too. We should hang out, being horror writers and all. #scriptchat -8:48 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb sounds like porn to me ha RT @Spitfire_King: #scriptchat isnt "X meets X" the title for the new "XXX" vin diesel film? lol #scriptchat -8:48 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb ha RT @Alex_Carrick: All I know i if youre pitching a horror flick, its good if someone inexplicably goes down into the basement #scriptchat -8:48 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD @Alex_Carrick: someone will be going down to the basement in the next chapter. so, that's a given. #scriptchat -8:47 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
ReneeRenegade @iscamedia if you meet someone at a party-- is it bad form to pass out your business cards? #scriptchat -8:47 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick RT @TravisLegge: I'm off to watch Bubba-HoTep @WordsmithSarah < I much preferred "My Name is Bruce" #scriptchat -8:47 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Spitfire_King #scriptchat isn't "X meets X" the title for the new "XXX" vin diesel film? lol -8:47 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @yeah_write @SissiePoohSOD cldn't resist the screenwriting erectile dysfunction line :) #scriptchat -8:47 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
quicksilverwest @yeah_write re:query. just speaking w/ Screenwriter on Set this week about subject: deals happen on pitches when author is GOLD. #scriptchat -8:47 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @Steenaholmes We're talking queries on #scriptchat a lot of the advice works for novels as well -8:47 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD @mindofbryan: no... I wasn't going to go that route. maybe "The Haunting" meets "With Honors", perhaps? :) #scriptchat -8:47 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @yeah_write yep, when he has to. His pro rep usually is enough to get a query out at least, which they write #scriptchat -8:47 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @TravisLegge thanks for joining! U can see our transcript post later www.scriptchat.blogspot.com #scriptchat -8:46 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick All I know is that if you're pitching a horror flick, it's good if someone inexplicably goes down into the basement. #scriptchat -8:46 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
AllanTMichaels @TravisLegge Thanks! #scriptchat -8:46 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write hehehe RT @jeannevb: @yeah_write U only have ONE chance to make a 1st impression, dont blow it by being premature ejaculator #scriptchat -8:46 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
renagades It is Funny! >RT @Alex_Carrick: the rest of the family is watching "Transformers" It has some surprisingly funny lines in it. #scriptchat. -8:46 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD @GoldenAgeofGeek: I'm still working on the story. it should be done before Christmas. just have 4 more chapters 2 go. #scriptchat -8:46 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @bklynMF r ur tweets protected? Bc if they r, they wont show up #scriptchat -8:46 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write The question was in general, not for me. I'm thinking everyone wants the answer to when and who. #scriptchat -8:46 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @bklynMF the 1 I responded to was in the #scriptchat tweetchat feed... r they not showing up now? I'll have to look -8:45 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
TravisLegge I'm off to watch Bubba-HoTep with @WordsmithSarah i'll be writing later, promise. Thanks for the wisdom all at #scriptchat -8:45 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mindofbryan @SissiePoohSOD Every campus has a ghost. Just don't say it's supernatural meets Old School. #scriptchat -8:45 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick How does one become a script doctor? Sounds like an ideal job. If you fix it, get credit. If fail, wasn't your fault. #scriptchat -8:45 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal Lots of ways to get script read without agent/manager... IF you have a great hook and know how to pitch/query. #scriptchat -8:45 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD RT @jeannevb: @yeah_write U only have ONE chance to make a 1st impression, dont blow it by being premature ejaculator < LMAO #scriptchat -8:45 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write @GoldenAgeofGeek So your manager knocks on doors? Like an agent in novel industry? #scriptchat -8:45 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb give #scriptchat kickback:) RT @jmiewald: "X Meets X" would be a great title, btw. I may have 2 write that & use it as a logline #scriptchat -8:45 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mindofbryan @jmiewald I have a storyline for that title, actually. Would actually work. #scriptchat -8:45 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @SissiePoohSOD Too little info to judge, honestly #scriptchat -8:45 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
TravisLegge BEST LOGLINE EVER!!! RT @AllanTMichaels: It's like "Plan 9 From Outer Space" meets "Los Manos: The Hands of Fate" - No good? #scriptchat -8:44 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
rachlanger @yeah_write I'd say for film you need a polished script that has been covered, unless you already have cred, then ideas are OK. #scriptchat -8:44 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Spitfire_King #scriptchat I'd hope with a fully developed script so as not to pitch too early? -8:44 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick In the background, the rest of the family is watching "Transformers" It has some surprisingly funny lines in it. #scriptchat. -8:44 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @yeah_write U only have ONE chance to make a 1st impression, dont blow it by being premature ejaculator #scriptchat -8:44 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD the story takes place on a university campus which is haunted, so is that an original idea? #scriptchat -8:44 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @yeah_write before I query, I have TONS of ppl I respect read the script, do rewrites, polish, really make sure its spot on #scriptchat -8:44 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jmiewald "X Meets X" would be a great title, btw. I may have to write that and use it as a logline. #scriptchat -8:43 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @yeah_write I have a manager so I say go for reps first. Otherwise it's all on u to get through the gatekeepr #scriptchat -8:43 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb RT @yeah_write: Question: Where should you be in the process before you begin querying? #scriptchat -8:43 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal Have polished script. RT @yeah_write: Question: Where should you be in the process before you begin querying? #scriptchat -8:43 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @dawnbierschwal *smooch* #scriptchat -8:43 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @cowgirlwriter @Timsn... i need a refill #scriptchat -8:42 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write Question: Where should you be in the process before you begin querying? And agents or managers, if not direct to prod. #scriptchat -8:42 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb r u pitching Jenna Jameson? haha RT @LisaFromNYC: w/ leather & nipples. @rachlanger: #scriptchat -8:42 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal Agree! RT @jeannevb: In an initial email query, Id focus more on great logline & synopsis than the "x meets x" line #scriptchat -8:42 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Spitfire_King #scriptchat I like M Hagues way of building a pitch, it makes sense to me, structured, and if I'm excited by the story, it's easier to pitch -8:42 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @dawnbierschwal definitely, if the situation is funny it's funny. If it isn't you're just going to call attention to the fact #scriptchat -8:41 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb true ... when DO u ppl work? ha RT @GoldenAgeofGeek: @jeannevb Towns usually down until Feb anyway #scriptchat -8:41 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
cowgirlwriter That's why we drink during this. I get it now. RT @jeannevb: @Timsn yes, ur making sense :) U must need to drink more ha #scriptchat -8:41 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD unless it's more like "Event Horizon" meets "Dead Poets Society"... #scriptchat -8:41 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mindofbryan @SissiePoohSOD Don't tell me you have an original idea? You'll never get anywhere in this town. #scriptchat -8:41 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
AllanTMichaels @JustinWHedges "Yahoo Serious Film Festival? I know those words, but they make no sense to me" #scriptchat -8:41 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
LisaFromNYC w/ leather & nipples. RT @rachlanger: Its like "Gigli" meets "Batman and Robin" may not be in your best interest. #scriptchat -8:41 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb In an initial email query, I'd focus more on great logline & synopsis than the "x meets x" line #scriptchat -8:41 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jmiewald A bad logline has "with unexpected results" or "more than he bargained for" in them #scriptchat -8:40 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @jeannevb Town's usually down until Feb anyway #scriptchat -8:40 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
iscamedia For what it's worth - parties are awful places to pitch. Get a contact then follow up. Intense is deeply unattractive. Be cool #scriptchat -8:40 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Timsn OMG!!! RT @rachlanger: Its like "Gigli" meets "Batman and Robin" may not be in your best interest. #scriptchat -8:40 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal I would think log lines should avoid self assessment like "it's very funny". #scriptchat -8:40 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick I think some of the it's like "x crossed with y" sitings are because it's just fun to come up with some wild paring. #scriptchat -8:40 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @Timsn yes, ur making sense :) U must need to drink more ha #scriptchat -8:40 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
AllanTMichaels It's like "Plan 9 From Outer Space" meets "Los Manos: The Hands of Fate" - No good? #scriptchat -8:39 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
JustinWHedges ...Note to self. chuck logline that reads: "Speed 2 meets Gigli" - So, no refs to Yahoo Serious? Gotcha! #scriptchat -8:39 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb Another note from @zacsanford this morning is wait 6 wks before following up on ur submitted script #scriptchat -8:39 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD I'm writing a horror story, but it's not really a cross between anything. #scriptchat -8:39 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb HAHA RT @rachlanger: Its like "Gigli" meets "Batman and Robin" may not be in your best interest. #scriptchat -8:39 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Timsn When using X meets X make sure they are relating to the part of the film you are trying to convey. #scriptchat Am I making sense? -8:39 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Spitfire_King #scriptchat Also, it's hard to know if your pitch is too parochial if you're an overseas writer, if it's 'American' enough or cliched -8:39 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write lol RT @rachlanger: Its like "Gigli" meets "Batman and Robin" may not be in your best interest. #scriptchat -8:39 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb If pro co asks for script, they will usually ask for signed release as well #scriptchat -8:39 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick RT @mckormickastleygreat cause locates your film but dangerous cause also pigeon holes #scriptchat < also often not an accurate description -8:38 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mckormickastley @jmiewald John Conner has the thirst. #scriptchat -8:38 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek X meets X is good for selling purposes. Producers want to know that they're going to make their money back #scriptchat -8:38 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
TravisLegge I understand the fear of trivializing the work, but I would say there is a virtue to x meets x especially if its accurate #scriptchat -8:38 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal "x meets y" also requires the person to know both films & draw conclusions... better at defining tone than spine of the story. #scriptchat -8:38 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
rachlanger Its like "Gigli" meets "Batman and Robin" may not be in your best interest. #scriptchat -8:38 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jmiewald @mckormickastley And the kicker is that the robots are all shirtless #scriptchat -8:38 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @jmiewald sounds interesting! : ) #scriptchat -8:37 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Spitfire_King #scriptchat the X meets X style is good to imply visuals and themes I'm trying to convey in one sentence here's hoping they like those films -8:37 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
quicksilverwest quick add: "incubation period" for scripts being negotiated more frequently. stronger pitch = empowered odds. #scriptchat -8:37 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick I just wrote a "Monster" story this weekend that's a cross between Frankenstein and Forbidden Planet #scriptchat. -8:37 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
karenquah RT @GoldenAgeofGeek: @jeannevb and hits! Never reference a flop -- Note to self. chuck logline that reads: "Speed 2 meets Gigli" #scriptchat -8:37 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mckormickastley @jmiewald I'd totally see that. Robots vs Vampires and Werewolves? Holy shit why has this line never been crossed? #scriptchat -8:37 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb When u pick co to pitch, be sure u know their credits to make certain its right fit. U dont want to pitch Rom Com to horror co #scriptchat -8:36 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
AllanTMichaels So what's the WORST logline people have read? #scriptchat -8:36 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write @quicksilverwest For genre, I like the x meets x, but you hear both use and don't use. I haven't used it yet in queries/pitches #scriptchat -8:36 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick I'm always worried about trivializing a story when it's summarized as a cross-between. Nevertheless, sometimes it helps. #scriptchat -8:36 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @jmiewald you'd actually get a read request off of that :) #scriptchat -8:36 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mckormickastley "x meets x" is great because it very quickly locates your film in the landscape, but dangerous because it also pigeon holes #scriptchat -8:36 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jmiewald "It's like New Moon meets Transformers 2" #scriptchat -8:35 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD I have a bottle of Pepsi Max & some triscuits w/dill flavored cream cheese. #scriptchat -8:35 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @iscamedia so glad u aren't sleeping : ) #scriptchat -8:35 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
TravisLegge How about mentioning cult films, sleeper hits, etc? Particularly if pitching for a direct to DVD production? #scriptchat -8:35 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @ttimechitchat I will def check it out... and pull site off the transcript : ) #scriptchat -8:34 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
quicksilverwest @yeah_write re: "x meets x." True, some dislike the usage, but trends well w/ pitches currently. "genre" description: works. #scriptchat -8:34 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
AllanTMichaels @mckormickastley #scriptchat - I think there's the proof that not every logline has a script. At least, I hope not! ;) -8:34 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
karenquah @jeannevb @dawnbierschwal: Has anyone else used virtualpitchfest.com to query? --new to me. will check it out. thanks! #scriptchat -8:34 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD @mckormickastley: sounds like an interesting movie. :) #scriptchat -8:34 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
iscamedia Just up late and still writing in the UK but following tweets and #scriptchat too. Feel very decadent with a glass of Rioja & some Stilton. -8:34 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
ttimechitchat RT @jeannevb: @ttimechitchat excellent! {I @ashleymeyers I have learned so much from his posts & he's always willing 2 help!} #scriptchat -8:34 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jmiewald Referencing other films is usually bad but can you reference anything? E.g., "It's Antigone in space"? Something like that? #scriptchat -8:33 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mckormickastley It's kind of like Dumb and Dumber 2 meets Ishtar, very, very funny, but a musical and set in a high school in the desert. #scriptchat -8:33 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick RT @karenquah you're here! there's your contribution right there! #scriptchat < How nice of you to say. Makes my evening -8:33 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb RT @dawnbierschwal: Has anyone else used virtualpitchfest.com to query? Nice thing is producer/agent MUST respond in 5 days. #scriptchat -8:33 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @GoldenAgeofGeek haha... that wld be embarrassing! #scriptchat -8:33 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @yeah_write as long as said film made money it's okay. Everyone respects a good BO even if they personally hated the film #scriptchat -8:32 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @yeah_write I"ve had producers ask me directly for the "x meets x" description so they can visualize if topic & profitability #scriptchat -8:32 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal Has anyone else used virtualpitchfest.com to query? Nice thing is producer/agent MUST respond in 5 days. #scriptchat -8:32 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
karenquah @Alex_Carrick you're here! there's your contribution right there! #scriptchat -8:32 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @jeannevb And their right credits. Interviewed a producer who has a really funny story about that #scriptchat -8:31 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @Alex_Carrick we're talking queries/loglines. I'm sure its similar in the novel world.. jump in #scriptchat -8:31 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write But you take a chance at alienating if person hated filmRT @jeannevb: ppl still do that as long as "X meet X" films are current #scriptchat -8:31 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
karenquah @GoldenAgeofGeek ha. interesting. could get a job just writing loglines. but how mundane. #scriptchat -8:31 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb absolutely! : ) RT @GoldenAgeofGeek: @jeannevb and hits! Never reference a flop #scriptchat -8:31 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal I tend to think that saying "it's X meets Y" is a good follow-up to a log line v. a log line itself. #scriptchat -8:31 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Alex_Carrick Not sure what I can contribute to #scriptchat, but always interesting to follow the discussion. -8:30 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb Also when u query, make sure u research the co & have the RIGHT names of ppl u address email to... spelled correctly #scriptchat -8:30 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
cowgirlwriter RT @jolenejahnke: Heard a speaker say once, "Every script has a logline, but not every logline has a script." #scriptchat -8:30 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write Same here, or at least after I've written 80%+ RT @TravisLegge: Loglines are very often the last thing I come up with. #scriptchat -8:30 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
TravisLegge True, but many short ideas can be grown into 90+ minutes. A short becomes a scene, a scene grows into a film. #scriptchat @GoldenAgeofGeek -8:30 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @jeannevb and hits! Never reference a flop #scriptchat -8:30 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
quicksilverwest @jennevb re: Michael Hauge: Truth about verbal. Synopsis for Verbal Pitch, Logline if passing through paper. Very GOOD. #scriptchat -8:30 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh RT @jeannevb: As synopsis, I usually use my verbal pitch. Michael Hauge has great book: Selling ur Story in 60 Seconds #scriptchat -8:29 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
ttimechitchat RT @Timsn: Any query letter examples out there? {http://bit.ly/3dikPq ~ follow @ashleymeyers he tweets loads of good info! } #scriptchat -8:29 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
ReneeRenegade RT @jeannevb: ppl may want to check out @ashleymeyers http://bit.ly/3dikPq - heres his post on query letters <- Thanks, all #scriptchat -8:29 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb ppl still do that as long as "X meet X" films are current #scriptchat -8:29 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jmiewald Parties are a great place to test loglines. Also fun to make up loglines at parties and see if something sticks #scriptchat -8:29 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write RT @jolenejahnke: Heard a speaker say once, "Every script has a logline, but not every logline has a script." #scriptchat -8:29 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @karenquah Get those all the time. I have a hole section devoted to great scripts that need better loglines! #scriptchat -8:29 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jolenejahnke Heard a speaker say once, "Every script has a logline, but not every logline has a script." #scriptchat -8:28 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal I love it when I share a log line and just from that one sentence I get a laugh. #scriptchat -8:28 PM Dec 13th, 2009

TravisLegge Loglines are very often the last thing I come up with. #scriptchat -8:28 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write lol RT @jeannevb: parties r also good test of if the story has a hook. If their face goes blank...need to rethink premise #scriptchat -8:28 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb RT @rachlanger: via @scriptdreric http://bit.ly/8QpN1I a blog post on query letters. He runs #loglinefriday contest on twitter. #scriptchat -8:28 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
quicksilverwest @jennevb Finally. Amen, and Thx! =) #scriptchat -8:28 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @TravisLegge Thing is you want to start with a story that needs 90 minutes or more to play out #scriptchat -8:27 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
karenquah @GoldenAgeofGeek and great scripts with average loglines? can you spot those too? (heehee, hoping mine belongs to latter) #scriptchat -8:27 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
bklynMF I've never written a logline, but I guess it's bad to say "It's like X meets X."? #scriptchat -8:27 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @JoannaDangelo @jmiewald parties r also good test of if the story has a hook. If their face goes blank...need to rethink premise #scriptchat -8:27 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
rachlanger Courtesy of @scriptdreric http://bit.ly/8QpN1I a blog post on query letters. He also runs a #loglinefriday contest on twitter. #scriptchat -8:27 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mindofbryan I usually come up with a logline just as I set to writing a project, current script, no clue what it would be. #scriptchat -8:26 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
TravisLegge I try to write lots of short scripts both as practice and as seeds for bigger ideas #scriptchat -8:26 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @quicksilverwest hey! welcome! nice to see u here #scriptchat -8:26 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
UncompletedWork Still out and about but wanted thank #scriptchat for sponsoring #screenwriterkaraoke this week. -8:26 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @karenquah Yeah there are those. You can spot 'em easy. Even the trailers looke generic #scriptchat -8:26 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write I have it.RT @jeannevb: As synopsis, I usually use my verbal pitch. Michael Hauge has great book: Selling ur Story in 60 Seconds #scriptchat -8:26 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
ttimechitchat @mindofbryan RT @yeah_write: You can find loglines and synopsis on www.imdb.com when you look up movies. #scriptchat -8:26 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
JoannaDangelo RT @jmiewald: A logline is handy at parties when u tell ppl ur a writer & they ask "What r u writing?" You have a pithy response #scriptchat -8:26 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @ttimechitchat excellent! #scriptchat -8:26 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
eyamie @jmiewald Pithy. Yes. That is exactly the word! #scriptchat -8:25 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb RT @ttimechitchat: @jeannevb - ppl may want to check out @ashleymeyers http://bit.ly/3dikPq - heres his post on query letters. #scriptchat -8:25 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb As synopsis, I usually use my verbal pitch. Michael Hauge has great book: Selling ur Story in 60 Seconds #scriptchat -8:25 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @jeannevb needless to say it will change :D #scriptchat -8:25 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
quicksilverwest Hi All, Greetings and Salutations! #scriptchat -8:25 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
eyamie @dawnbierschwal T|he pre-script and post-script logline are two separate beasts, often #scriptchat -8:25 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
karenquah @GoldenAgeofGeek Right. Aren't there like a ton of great scripts with mediocre loglines & vise versa? #scriptchat -8:25 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
ReneeRenegade RT @eyamie Speaking of babies, loglines are like "so tell me about your baby. In one sentence." <- Got it :-) #scriptchat -8:25 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
ttimechitchat @jeannevb - ppl may want to check out @ashleymeyers http://bit.ly/3dikPq - here's his post on query letters. #scriptchat -8:25 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal @SissiePoohSOD Well worth it! #scriptchat -8:24 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jmiewald A logline is handy at parties when you tell ppl you are a writer and they ask "What are you writing?" You have a pithy response #scriptchat -8:24 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @Timsn I start w logline too. Helpful in knowing if premise is good enuf to take time to write #scriptchat -8:24 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD @dawnbierschwal: I'm thinking about upgrading to IMDB Pro. I think it'll be a big help to me. #scriptchat -8:24 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Timsn Any query letter examples out there? #scriptchat -8:24 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @PennyAsh HAHA That IS sappy haha #scriptchat -8:23 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @eyamie Good description, and be sure to add all the high points #scriptchat -8:23 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Timsn I start with a logline and revise as needed. It never gets very far from the original. One of the guide tools I use #scriptchat -8:23 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD RT @eyamie: @PennyAsh Speaking of babies, loglines are like "so tell me about your baby. In one sentence." < I like that. #scriptchat -8:22 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @karenquah That's why those are usually the successful ones! #scriptchat -8:22 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb RT @yeah_write: @shabanky For novels, try agentquery.com for scripts, not so sure if its all that different. #scriptchat -8:22 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal If you don't have IMDB Pro, be sure to get it... SO much more to offer than the basic site. #scriptchat -8:22 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @jeannevb tagline for my book was "You enchant me with your reality" lol sappy #scriptchat -8:22 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb I hope some of u w finished scripts r going to query @zacsanford at Suntaur. Submission info http://bit.ly/4dvyXH DEADLINE THURS #scriptchat -8:22 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
ReneeRenegade RT @yeah_write I was trying to write logline/syn for an Inktip query, so I studied what IMDB.com had on similar. <-- Thanks! #scriptchat -8:22 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
karenquah @GoldenAgeofGeek Some of the best loglines also give a little of the "personality" of the story --agree & easier said than done #scriptchat -8:21 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @winsloweliot come join us! We're talking queries and loglines #scriptchat -8:21 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
eyamie @PennyAsh Speaking of babies, loglines are like "so tell me about your baby. In one sentence." #scriptchat -8:21 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal @jmiewald Coming up with log line helps me get clear on the story I want to tell... and make sure it has a strong hook. #scriptchat -8:21 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write @shabanky For novels, try agentquery.com for scripts, not so sure if it's all that different. #scriptchat -8:21 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
quicksilverwest [ #Screenwriters: To View The conversation at #scriptchat (happening NOW 12.13.09) click: http://twubs.com/scriptchat ] -8:21 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD I've been a member of IMDb since 2005, but never realized it had so many resources. #scriptchat -8:21 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @karenquah LOL good point #scriptchat -8:21 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @jmiewald Sort of. I start with a proto logline or concept. Important thing is that nothing is written stone #scriptchat -8:21 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb I do, but not everyone does RT @jmiewald: Do you create the logline as the first thing you do when writing? #scriptchat -8:21 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
karenquah @PennyAsh what are you talkin' about grl? Ugly is ugly. And that's all i have to say about it! #scriptchat -8:20 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Timsn IMDB is a great resource. Need to check that out too. #scriptchat -8:20 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
winsloweliot RT @Donna_Carrick @jeannevb @georgia_mcbride (leads #YAlitchat) post on queries: info for screenwriters 2 http://bit.ly/1Anamq #scriptchat -8:20 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
shabanky Does anybody know where I can read a good example of a query letter? Book/site? Thanks:) #scriptchat -8:20 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb haha ur so cute RT @rachlanger: Some of my own scary examples of loglines. Yikes, scary to share these. http://bit.ly/wDqn5 #scriptchat -8:20 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
rachlanger @jeannevb In that case, I'll get the limes! #scriptchat -8:20 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jmiewald Do you create the logline as the first thing you do when writing? #scriptchat -8:19 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @mindofbryan yes, its like a tagline... the hook/premise of ur story #scriptchat -8:19 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write In querying for novels, I have an 80% request rate, but with scripts I just can't seem to get it write, I mean right. #scriptchat -8:19 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mckormickastley @GoldenAgeofGeek examples? #scriptchat -8:19 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD @yeah_write: great. think I'll do that. :) thnx again. #scriptchat -8:19 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
rachlanger Some of my own scary examples of loglines. Yikes, scary to share these. http://bit.ly/wDqn5 #scriptchat -8:19 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @karenquah How about babies who are so ugly they'r cute? #scriptchat -8:19 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
MonicaEmme #scriptchat is there a topic tonight? or is it the time where it's free for all? -8:19 PM Dec 13th, 2009
 
GoldenAgeofGeek Some of the best loglines also give a little of the "personality" of the story #scriptchat -8:19 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
beingbrad @diablocody want to join in the #scriptchat? Talking loglines, queries and the one sheet... Right now on Twitter. -8:18 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @rachlanger now if we can just get @johnaugust's handsome, funny ass back here to chat w us someday,I'll pass out tequila shots! #scriptchat -8:18 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write @SissiePoohSOD I was trying to write logline/syn for an Inktip query, so I studied what IMDB.com had on similar. Really helped #scriptchat -8:18 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @jeannevb great to be back #scriptchat -8:17 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb RT @rachlanger: Some comedy samples courtesy of @johnaugust s blog. http://bit.ly/4wiTcw #scriptchat -8:17 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb If ppl have query resources they want to share, @ me & I'll add a resource section to our blog www.scriptchat.blogspot.com #scriptchat -8:17 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Donna_Carrick RT @karenquah: @Donna_Carrick Lurk away Donna. Just no ugly baby talk tonight, okay? #scriptchat /I promise -lips are sealed. -8:17 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD @yeah_write: thanks. I hadn't noticed that when I'm @ IMDb.com. will check it out. #scriptchat -8:17 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @karenquah yes! SO happy to see @GoldenAgeofGeek back : ) #scriptchat -8:16 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @scripts2 I try to do logline in 1 but if u need 2, then u need 2 #scriptchat -8:16 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Donna_Carrick RT @jeannevb: @georgia_mcbride (who leads #YAlitchat) posted this on queries.. info for screenwriters too: http://bit.ly/1Anamq #scriptchat -8:16 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
rachlanger Some comedy samples courtesy of @johnaugust 's blog. http://bit.ly/4wiTcw #scriptchat -8:16 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
karenquah @Donna_Carrick Lurk away Donna. Just no ugly baby talk tonight, okay? #scriptchat -8:16 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb Here's a post by our own @DreamsGrafter on querying: http://bit.ly/7W6EsV #scriptchat -8:16 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
karenquah @jeannevb Great to be here. Good to see some new faces & returns like @GoldenAgeofGeek ! #scriptchat -8:15 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mckormickastley have you checked out #365loglines? Another twitter chat posting a logline a day for a year. good fun, good practice. #scriptchat -8:15 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write You can find loglines and synopsis on www.imdb.com when you look up movies. #scriptchat -8:15 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @georgia_mcbride (who leads #YAlitchat) posted this on queries.. great info for screenwriters too: http://bit.ly/1Anamq #scriptchat -8:15 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mckormickastley @GoldenAgeofGeek agreed! #scriptchat -8:15 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Donna_Carrick I'm here at #scriptchat but lurking tonight -- this is all learning for me. -8:14 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
iscamedia RT @PennyAsh: @mckormickastley I think both, so much depends on taste #scriptchat > and what's in vogue/needed/wanted etc. -8:14 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
karenquah @tylerweaver omg, is that you tyler? You mean you're real & not a toon character? #scriptchat -8:14 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh An example :) #scriptchat -8:14 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @karenquah hi babe! Great to see u here! #scriptchat -8:14 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh A Puca falls in love with a girl who doesn't believe in Fairies while stopping evil land developers from destroying their forest #scriptchat -8:13 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mindofbryan Can somebody post a sample logline? or is it more than 140? Is it like a tagline? #scriptchat -8:13 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @JoannaDangelo ur welcome : ) #scriptchat -8:13 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jmiewald There are two differing reasons for a logline: 1, to keep you focused as a writer. 2, to sell the script to others. #scriptchat -8:13 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb In the synopsis, make sure not to ramble or give too much story detail. Just highlights to show quick pace & get em interested #scriptchat -8:13 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mckormickastley bad no, good yes, there are a lot of reasons to say No, but only a few to say Yes. #scriptchat -8:13 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Donna_Carrick RT @LisaFromNYC: RT @robinkelly1: My blog post on pitching also includes lots of loglines links: http://bit.ly/8mF89c #scriptchat -8:13 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
karenquah @jeannevb hey sweetie, great turn out. #scriptchat -8:13 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @karenquah Nice to see you too Karen! #scriptchat -8:13 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @mckormickastley I think both, so much depends on taste #scriptchat -8:12 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
JoannaDangelo @jeannevb Okay thanks. #scriptchat -8:12 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD @GoldenAgeofGeek: very true. my problem is how I can make my story interesting enough to b produced? #scriptchat -8:12 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @mckormickastley no good or bad. There's worked or didn't work #scriptchat -8:12 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mckormickastley Can you really say a logline is bad if it generates a script request? Can it be good if it's ignored? #scriptchat -8:11 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
karenquah @GoldenAgeofGeek hey Mike, good to see you here! #scriptchat -8:11 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jmiewald Then they realize you already wrote it so might as well jump on board with you #scriptchat -8:11 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @SissiePoohSOD practice, practice and more practice #scriptchat -8:11 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb Logline shld have hook of ur story & also show the potential 4 conflict/emotion in script to peak interest #scriptchat -8:11 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @jmiewald Amen! #scriptchat -8:10 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mckormickastley I think the greatness of a logline is defined by the results it generates. #scriptchat -8:10 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD sounds easy enough, but how can I do it effectively so it's an attention grabber? #scriptchat -8:10 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
tylerweaver Agreed. Simple. To the point. RT @jeannevb: Blake Snyder has great logline advice in Save The Cat #scriptchat -8:10 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @CalebHolyfield YW :) #scriptchat -8:10 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb RT @GoldenAgeofGeek: Logline should be concise, descriptive and in some way unique #scriptchat -8:10 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @JoannaDangelo yep #scriptchat -8:10 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jmiewald I think a great logline is an idea that makes someone else immediately want to steal it and write it themselves #scriptchat -8:10 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Donna_Carrick RT @PennyAsh: @CalebHolyfield Happy birthday :) #scriptchat /Caleb's birthday? Happy B-Day! -8:09 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek Logline should be concise, descriptive and in some way unique #scriptchat -8:09 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb RT @rachlanger: great practice to read loglines/queries & see what works, what doesnt. Some producers allow volunteer reading #scriptchat -8:09 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
JoannaDangelo @jeannevb you mean logline, short synopsis & the "sell/pitch" all in one page - that's it. #scriptchat -8:09 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Timsn Inktip has great examples of loglines #scriptchat -8:09 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @beingbrad generally speaking, yeah. You're sending to a guy who knows story, so he wants to see what you've got #scriptchat -8:09 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb Blake Snyder has great logline advice in Save The Cat #scriptchat -8:09 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Donna_Carrick @jeannevb My money's on the Grande Marnier for @AuthorRussell ! ;-) #scriptchat -8:08 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb Let's talk logline since its critical to getting the producer/agents attn #scriptchat -8:08 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
rachlanger It is great practice to ready loglines/queries and see what works, what doesn't. Some producers will allow volunteer reading #scriptchat -8:08 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @JoannaDangelo everything in one page. Start off w ur credentials. If u arent produced, then discuss y YOU r the 1 to write it #scriptchat -8:08 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
beingbrad @GoldenAgeofGeek Including every major plot point, all acts and story resolution? #scriptchat -8:07 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @CalebHolyfield Happy birthday :) #scriptchat -8:07 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
JoannaDangelo @jeannevb What makes a great logline - advice? #scriptchat -8:07 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb a fantastic logline is key to hook the producer to request the script #scriptchat -8:07 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
CheekyWench you tryin to tell me sumptin? RT @PennyAsh: @CheekyWench #scriptchat -8:07 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
karenquah @beingbrad One sheet - your details, sthg that sets u apart - achievement, g8 logline, short synopsis, pos. tagline & theme #scriptchat -8:06 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb The query should not exceed 1 page #scriptchat -8:06 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @CalebHolyfield happy birthday! Talking queries and loglines #scriptchat -8:06 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
AllanTMichaels @yeah_write Thanks. #scriptchat -8:06 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
JoannaDangelo @jeannevb u mentioned logline, short synopsis also one pager? #scriptchat -8:06 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @jmiewald queries and loglines #scriptchat -8:06 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @CheekyWench #scriptchat -8:06 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @beingbrad One sheet is just what it sounds, a treatment for synopsis that is 1 page long and no longer #scriptchat -8:06 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @AllanTMichaels he's looking for completed scripts. Check out our blog for details: www.scriptchat.blogspot.com #scriptchat -8:05 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
JoannaDangelo RT @jeannevb: if u r querying comedy, great to have ur query w humor so ur comedic voice shows thru #scriptchat -8:05 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jmiewald Shalom. What's the topic? #scriptchat -8:05 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
deathdangerman I eat cheese #scriptchat -8:05 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
AllanTMichaels @GoldenAgeofGeek Didn't expect there to be. I was just curious. Thanks! #scriptchat -8:05 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @zacsanford i'm trying to tweet out ur advice fr earlier, Zac... sorry ur stuck at airport #scriptchat -8:05 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write yes, completed only RT @AllanTMichaels: @jeannevb Im assuming hes only accepting queries on completed mss? #scriptchat -8:05 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb if u r querying comedy, great to have ur query w humor so ur comedic voice shows thru #scriptchat -8:05 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
beingbrad I've heard many variations of the one sheet #scriptchat -8:05 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
AllanTMichaels @jeannevb I'm assuming he's only accepting queries on completed mss? #scriptchat -8:04 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
JoannaDangelo RT @jeannevb: if u r submitting to @zacsanfords co, be sure 2 read transcript to get his query advice. Ill try to repeat it here #scriptchat -8:04 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
beingbrad Can someone define a one sheet please #scriptchat -8:04 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb Query essentials: credentials/awards, GREAT logline, short synopis #scriptchat -8:04 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek @AllanTMichaels Not too many markets for a full series from an unknown writer there, sorry to say #scriptchat -8:04 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb Next few tweets fr me come directly fr @zacsanford's advice... #scriptchat -8:04 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford Well waiting to pick up the boss I'm listening to "Born Standing Up" by Steve Martin. #scriptchat -8:03 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb if u r submitting to @zacsanford's co, be sure to read transcript to get his query advice. I'll try to repeat it here #scriptchat -8:03 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD what do I need to know to make my query stand out from the rest? #scriptchat -8:03 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek the two go hand in hand. Queries and loglines. You're best query is a really catchy logline #scriptchat -8:03 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
AllanTMichaels Is there a difference in how you query a screenplay v. a TV bible? #scriptchat -8:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @GoldenAgeofGeek welcome! We're talking queries and loglines. Nice to see you! #scriptchat -8:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal @yeah_write Hi! #scriptchat -8:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb When u query, be sure to spellcheck, use proper grammar & keep it to 1 page #scriptchat -8:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write Regular followers, please ignore my tweets for the next hour. We will be discussing screenwriting. But if you're interested... #scriptchat -8:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
GoldenAgeofGeek I'm here #scriptchat -8:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mckormickastley @KageyNYC2 Is this thing on? I can break through walls, I just can't seem to get this thing... #scriptchat -8:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb let me remind all who r here tonight, u r now eligible to query @zacsanford!!! Must be submitted by THURSDAY info on our blog #scriptchat -8:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
AllanTMichaels @jeannevb @yeah_write #scriptchat - Thanks! Looking forward to it. -8:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @KageyNYC2 I see you #scriptchat -8:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
JoannaDangelo @PennyAsh ok #scriptchat -8:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write @dawnbierschwal Hey there! #scriptchat -8:00 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @jmiewald tonight we're talking queries and loglines #scriptchat -8:00 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
SissiePoohSOD @KageyNYC2: I saw your tweet... #scriptchat -8:00 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jolenejahnke Hope all my screenwriting friends are following #scriptchat tonight. Discussing Queries & Loglines. Heading to Tweetchat.com See u there! -8:00 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mckormickastley Any producer/agents present tonight? #scriptchat -8:00 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yeah_write @AllanTMichaels Welcome. Hope you enjoy. #scriptchat -8:00 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
dawnbierschwal Good evening, screenwriters. #scriptchat -8:00 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @AllanTMichaels welcome!!! We dont bite : ) #scriptchat -8:00 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jmiewald Do you write things specifically as a way to get your foot in the door? #scriptchat -8:00 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb some great pts made today at EURO chat so be sure to read transcript once posted #scriptchat -7:59 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
KageyNYC2 Still not seeing my tweets in #scriptchat feed - can you all see this? Check. Check 1. Sibilance. Sibilance. Check. Check 2. Sibilance. -7:59 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb #scriptchat TOPIC: Loglines, one sheets, queries...what's the best approach to peeking interest of producer/agent? -7:59 PM Dec 13th, 2009

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johnrackham @zacsanford2 Thanks for all the advice. I'm sure everyone's found it very usefuil. #scriptchat -4:03 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
robinkelly1 #scriptchat Good point about Twitter, my editing skills have improved a lot. It's amazing how much you can cut and it still makes perfect se -4:03 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Mockwriter @jeannevb #scriptchat Bit late, if I worked the timing right. That's 2.00 am over here :o( -4:03 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Bang2write What I will say: too many writers confuse TAGLINES ("No one in space will hear you scream") w/ loglines (description of STORY) #scriptchat -4:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb love that! RT @terraling: #scriptchat The test of a good pitch is whether someone else can repeat it. #scriptchat -4:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @Bang2write Got a mo to clarify?... are query letters a US thing or are they practice in the UK too? #scriptchat -4:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Bang2write @DreamsGrafter Not to me you're not, it's X Factor final baby, lol #scriptchat -4:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
kingisafink @WellTold we want to save the best for later...but no one’s gonna bite if they don’t know what they’re biting, yes? #scriptchat -4:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
terraling #scriptchat The test of a good pitch is whether someone else can repeat it. -4:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @Bang2write We're talking loglines and query letters. #scriptchat -4:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @PennyAsh i try to keep it 1, but def no more than 2 #scriptchat -4:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
CTK1 -RT @jeannevb: - #writechat peeps... how about learning SCREENWRITING in 2010 :) Come to #scriptchat any Sunday 8pm EST. We LOVE novelists -4:00 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
johnrackham RT @zacsanford2: Remember to check out @jeannevb's blg about how to query me by this coming Thursday. #scriptchat -4:00 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter RT @zacsanford2 Remember to check out @jeannevb's blg about how to query me by this coming Thursday. #scriptchat - http://bit.ly/4MP2Ie -4:00 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @Mockwriter we repeat same topic 8pm EST if u want to come back :) #scriptchat -3:59 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
eyamie @WellTold Well played, welltold. Use tweeting skills to keep loglines succinct! #scriptchat -3:59 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yingandyang it was great listening, will drop by again - and become a regular contributor. I feel inspired by all these creative minds #scriptchat -3:59 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
HoodedMan I have watched great movies based on novels, but they are still a lesser story #writechat #scriptchat -3:59 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb www.scriptchat.blogspot.com RT @zacsanford2: Remember to check out @jeannevbs blg about how to query me by this coming Thursday. #scriptchat -3:59 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
teatraveler Wishing everyone a very pleasant good evening and/or afternoon. #Scriptchat very helpful. Thanks to one & all. Good night. -3:58 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Mockwriter #scriptchat Seems I missed alot here. Trying to play catch-up. -3:58 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
kingisafink RT @DreamsGrafter Join #scriptchat & take advantage of @zacsandford's #scriptchat offer: http://bit.ly/4MP2Ie - we're talking loglines. -3:58 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 Remember to check out @jeannevb's blg about how to query me by this coming Thursday. #scriptchat -3:57 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
HoodedMan A novel is like painting: remove a piece and the entire work is lessened #writechat #scriptchat -3:57 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
WellTold Def don't leave a hanging end for logline - producers/funders want to know the story, no time for guessing. #scriptchat -3:57 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 Well all, it was great chatting with you but I need to do some work. I'll try to jump in next week too. #scriptchat -3:57 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter What happened? terraling I learnt that the hard way with my pitching experience at SWF. And from listening to Jonathan Darby. #scriptchat -3:57 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
HoodedMan Therefore virtually any script so far based on other material is a hack #writechat #scriptchat -3:57 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
kingisafink Just catching up...found our paper query vs. email query answer in an earlier #scriptchat tweet. So much great info here. Thanks! -3:56 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @WellTold Come join #scriptchat and take advantage of @zacsandford's #scriptchat offer: http://bit.ly/4MP2Ie - we're talking loglines. -3:56 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
HoodedMan On from novel to film: Removing pieces of a novel in process doesn't work, because every piece is a part of the whole #writechat #scriptchat -3:56 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @jeannevb Log line should be what, 2 sentences? Less? More? #scriptchat -3:56 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @LisaFromNYC @eyamie so glad u stopped in.... it'll keep going for a bit, so dont leave if u dont have to #scriptchat -3:54 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter RT @michellelipton I can offer you a blog post I wrote about one page outlines ... http://bit.ly/2w2oUY #scriptchat -3:54 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @zacsanford2 excellent. I took some notes on ur thoughts tho so I can pimp ur brilliance :) #scriptchat -3:54 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yingandyang @jeannevb will do!#scriptchat -3:54 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
johnrackham @zacsanford2 Brain Damage have waited very patiently for me to finish post myself on no money. They are very nice. #scriptchat -3:54 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
LisaFromNYC It cleared some cobwebs. RT @jeannevb hope u all got at least 1 nugget of goodness today on queries/loglines! #scriptchat -3:53 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
terraling My twopenneth is keep it simple. And by simple, I mean simple. #scriptchat -3:52 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
eyamie @jeannevb Thanks for the gracious hosting and thanks to all! #scriptchat -3:52 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
johnrackham @zacsanford2 I met Darren from Brain Damage in Cannes when I'd just about given up on distribution. My film was made for £3000. #scriptchat -3:52 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @johnrackham Do you update them w/ how your script is developing? To keep them in the loop? #scriptchat -3:52 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @yingandyang so happy ur enjoying it! Dont forget to go to our #scriptchat blog to catch up on past wks transcripts http://bit.ly/185tzs -3:52 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
terraling Hands have been busy rocking baby to sleep, but I've been listening in. #scriptchat -3:52 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
kingisafink Is it more common nowadays to write physical query letters or to send them via email? #scriptchat -3:52 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @Mockwriter Have you written any query letters to production companies? #scriptchat -3:51 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 sorry my internet at work is being spotty today. Not sure why. #scriptchat -3:51 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb hope u all got at least 1 nugget of goodness today on queries/loglines! #scriptchat -3:51 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Donna_Carrick RT @davidspies: RT @jeannevb: u can query @zacsanford2 up until THURS http://scriptchat.blogspot.com/ TAKE HIS ADVICE! #scriptchat -3:51 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yingandyang @jeannevb this is immensly helpful! #scriptchat -3:51 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
johnrackham @DreamsGrafter Cannes was a last minute thing. I had no idea what I was doing there. #scriptchat -3:51 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
120pgs @zacsanford2 #scriptchat It's great to know that companies do read unsolicited scripts. A friend from SC did an in (cont) http://tl.gd/18bke -3:51 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb I'm heading back to writing but will be here to lead the 8pm EST #scriptchat -3:50 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Mockwriter @DreamsGrafter Thanks for the heads-up #scriptchat -3:50 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
davidspies RT @jeannevb: Don't forget, u can query @zacsanford2 up until THURS http://scriptchat.blogspot.com/ TAKE HIS ADVICE! #scriptchat -3:49 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @Donna_Carrick yeah! #writechat #scriptchat -3:49 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
pattyfantasia RT @johnrackham: Blake Snyder gave the best logline advice I've seen in Save the Cat! #scriptchat -3:49 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
johnrackham @DreamsGrafter They haven't seen it. I hadn't expected to have to pitch it when I met them, either. #scriptchat -3:49 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb RT @zacsanford2: @yingandyang With query letters it is always written in letter form. No need to be too creative on it. #scriptchat -3:49 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 @johnrackham Ah, I know Brain Damage really well. Nice people over there. #scriptchat -3:49 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @DreamsGrafter Helps to have experience writing blurbs for my books but log lines are much shorter #scriptchat #inspired -3:48 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @Shannon_Delany haha about the trimming. I'm dying to write a novel next #scriptchat #writechat -3:48 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Donna_Carrick RT @jeannevb: we're sucking up to u all so u let us adapt ur work haha #writechat #scriptchat /OH, baby, anytime!!! We'll talk... -3:48 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @johnrackham had they read the last draft? #scriptchat -3:48 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @KarlBimshas @Shannon_Delany I SO want to do nano next yr. Buried in this script though... soon enuf #scriptchat #writechat -3:47 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
johnrackham @zacsanford2 Thanks, Zac. I think I'm in between. I shot my own script and Maxim Media/Brain Damage are distributing on dvd. #scriptchat -3:47 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yingandyang I think I see from other tweets what is meant by intro - short biog of yourself?#scriptchat -3:47 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @PennyAsh Ha ha ... brilliant ... well done. #scriptchat #inspired -3:47 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @johnrackham That's' great! ... And you had something to hand over ... #scriptchat -3:46 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @jeannevb Love this, my log line just resolved itself :) #writechat #scriptchat -3:46 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
johnrackham @DreamsGrafter But I've passed their deadline for next yrs production slate because I wanted to get it right for me. #scriptchat -3:46 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 @yingandyang With query letters it is always written in letter form. No need to be too creative on it. #scriptchat -3:46 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @Donna_Carrick we're sucking up to u all so u let us adapt ur work haha #writechat #scriptchat -3:46 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @lisabarrass It's all about relationships ... #scriptchat -3:45 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @jeannevb And I'm out woot #scriptchat -3:45 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @mindofbryan that wld be great, Brian! We BYOB here :) #writechat #scriptchat -3:45 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
teatraveler RT @zacsanford2: @eyamie Give a short intro on you as the writer (any past experience & awards and/or why you wrote the story). #scriptchat -3:45 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @PennyAsh is in twitter jail #scriptchat -3:45 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yingandyang @zacsanford2 got it, thanks - with the intro should that be in 'script' format or written as a story? thanks again #scriptchat -3:45 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @michellelipton you'll also have the chance to take advantage of @zacsanford's #scriptchat offer ... http://bit.ly/4MP2Ie -3:44 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
johnrackham @DreamsGrafter I pitched the unimproved version to a US distributor in Cannes 2008 & got instant interest. #scriptchat -3:44 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
mindofbryan @jeannevb Maybe be around for #scriptchat tonight. #writechat -3:44 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 @eyamie Give a short intro on you as the writer (any past experience & awards and/or why you wrote the story). #scriptchat -3:44 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Donna_Carrick RT @jeannevb: #writechat learn SCREENWRITING in 10 :) #scriptchat any Sunday 8pm EST. We LOVE novelists : )/You're so good to novelists..;=P -3:44 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @michellelipton Hey Michelle ... we're talking loglines and query letters ... fancy sharing a few words of experience/wisdom? #scriptchat -3:43 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
eyamie @zacsanford2 Intro? Explain. Pages? #scriptchat -3:43 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb 8pm EST : ) RT @labtoad: @jeannevb 8pm for #scriptchat ?? -3:43 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
robinkelly1 Yes. I watched someone do that for 20m. Excruciating RT @DreamsGrafter: it's important not to get caught up in plot w/ pitch. #scriptchat -3:43 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 @johnrackham Usually if you have one film your agent/manager (if you have one) would setup pitch meetings instead of querying. #scriptchat -3:42 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter I've only started w/ cold queries ... am learning so much from this #scriptchat -3:42 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb #writechat peeps: Tonight #scriptchat is talking queries & loglines.... 8pm EST -3:42 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
teatraveler Please excuse me, I am a neophyte. #scriptchat -3:42 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
filmutopia #scriptchat - OK, that's all I've got this week... Aaaaaachoooooooooo! (Poorly) -3:42 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
johnrackham @DreamsGrafter The script I'm thinking of should be ready by the New Year. I'm redrafting. #scriptchat -3:42 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
eyamie @yingandyang Nope. In screenwriting you need to be a great writer of marketing materials, business letters, treatments, etc #scriptchat -3:41 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb #writechat peeps... how about learning SCREENWRITING in 2010 :) Come to #scriptchat any Sunday 8pm EST. We LOVE novelists : ) -3:41 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
labtoad @jeannevb 8pm for #scriptchat ?? -3:41 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
filmutopia #scriptchat I write my primary logline before I write the script - then post script, I try to find about 20 different ways to sell the story -3:41 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 Query usually incls logline, synopsis, contact info & intro. RT @yingandyang: one thing - a query is not a treatment, right!? #scriptchat -3:41 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
robinkelly1 .@LisaFromNYC A good ending/twist will make me forgive the rest of script. Audience remember gd endings. Rest can be rewritten #scriptchat -3:40 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
johnrackham @zacsanford2 Would having had 1 film taken up by a distributor count as established? #scriptchat -3:40 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 If you do query with an uncompleted script you can say "Can I send it in in two weeks, I wanted a final polish." #scriptchat -3:40 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @lisabarrass You've got good people skills! ... Nice touch. :) #scriptchat -3:40 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @amiestuart i'm leaving soon. Have to lead #scriptchat tonight 8pm EST, so I need to get back to writing -3:39 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yingandyang one thing - a query is not a treatment, right!? #scriptchat -3:39 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @johnrackham It's a good way to test the market w/ your idea but if they ask you for your script ... ??? #scriptchat -3:39 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @johnrackham personally, I wldn't query something unless it was done... if they have to wait 2 months for it, the momentum gone #scriptchat -3:39 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yingandyang Really enjoying this stream of advice, hopefully will be able to make a meaningful contribution with my own experiences #scriptchat -3:39 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 Only query w/completed material unless established RT @johnrackham: Is it worth sndng a query about a script that isnt finished? #scriptchat -3:38 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter Good question! RT @johnrackham Is it worth sending a query about a script that isn't finished? #scriptchat -3:38 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
filmutopia #scriptchat - the way they pitch their current slate tells me a lot about how and what to pitch to them -3:38 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Writer2k9 #scriptchat Need some inspiration...my description skills suck -3:38 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @filmutopia excellent idea, Clive... why arent u sleeping or drinking hot tea? :) #scriptchat -3:38 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
eyamie @filmutopia Brilliant idea. Always always consider your audience. #scriptchat -3:37 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb RT @filmutopia: #scriptchat - I write a unique logline 4 each prod-co, designed to match their slate or production philosophy. #scriptchat -3:37 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter RT @jeannevb: DOn't forget, u can query @zacsanford2 up until THURS http://scriptchat.blogspot.com/ TAKE HIS ADVICE! #scriptchat -3:37 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh RT @jeannevb: DOn't forget, u can query @zacsanford2 up until THURS http://scriptchat.blogspot.com/ TAKE HIS ADVICE! #scriptchat -3:37 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
lisabarrass #scriptchat - if I'm emailing an 'info@' addy and no contact name, I open with a 'good morning/afternoon (pro co name)' -3:37 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
johnrackham Is it worth sending a query about a script that isn't finished? #scriptchat -3:37 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb also do ur research on the co's ur querying... dont send a fam comedy to co that does horror...RESEARCH #scriptchat -3:37 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
filmutopia #scriptchat - I write a unique logline for each prod-co, which is designed to match their slate or production philosophy. -3:36 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 @d0kk Loglines are the hardest thing to master. Look at sites like trackingb.com to see some horrible ones agencies even use. #scriptchat -3:36 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb DOn't forget, u can query @zacsanford2 up until THURS http://scriptchat.blogspot.com/ TAKE HIS ADVICE! #scriptchat -3:36 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Donna_Carrick RT @jeannevb: @amiestuart i dont know babe... i'm on EURO #scriptchat right now #writechat /But NA #scriptchat at 8pm, right? -3:36 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter RT @johnrackham: @d0kk "It's how the 'who' and the 'what is it?' come together in an intriguing combination #scriptchat -3:36 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 So give a call or do more research to see if the person is still listed at the company or not. #scriptchat -3:36 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @jeannevb And grammar too #scriptchat -3:36 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh Absolutely RT @zacsanford2: @PennyAsh And make sure you spell the person's name you are addressing the letter to is correct! #scriptchat -3:35 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @robinkelly1 to get caught up in plot w/ pitch. #scriptchat -3:35 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
d0kk #scriptchat - must confess this is all very helpful, guys. I struggle with loglines like you wouldn't believe. A new draft everyday it seems -3:35 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
LisaFromNYC What if it's a twist ending like USUAL SUSPECTS? RT @robinkelly1 I need to know how it ends. #scriptchat -3:35 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @robinkelly1 I've discovered that to be true. Ppl want to know the end - but at the same time, it's important not ... #scriptchat -3:34 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @amiestuart i dont know babe... i'm on EURO #scriptchat right now #writechat -3:34 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
teatraveler RT @zacsanford2 Give company at least 6 wks b4U follow-up b/c sometimes another script comes n that will receive read priority #scriptchat -3:34 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb best writing foot fwd! RT @PennyAsh: Something to remember, spell check is your friend, a query with misspelling is not good #scriptchat -3:34 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @robinkelly1 if i'm pitching in person, I leave it out. If they ask, I'll tell tho #scriptchat -3:34 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh Something to remember, spell check is your friend, a query with misspelling is not good #scriptchat -3:33 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 Sorry if I miss a question, feel free to repeat it as I'm multi-tasking at the moment :) #scriptchat -3:32 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
johnrackham @d0kk that makes us want to see this story unfold." #scriptchat -3:32 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
robinkelly1 I'm not sure about the leaving out the ending in a query/synopsis, I need to know how it ends. Endings are crucial. #scriptchat -3:32 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
johnrackham @d0kk "It's how the 'who' and the 'what is it?' come together in an intriguing combination #scriptchat -3:32 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb nice of u... many dont RT @zacsanford2: @jeannevb I always let people know my time frame (typically 4 to 6 weeks) for follow-up. #scriptchat -3:31 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 Give the company at least 6 weeks before you follow-up because sometimes another script comes in that will receive read priority #scriptchat -3:31 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
lisabarrass @DreamsGrafter #scriptchat - absolutely. -3:31 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
LisaFromNYC awesome! RT @robinkelly1: My blog post on pitching also includes lots of loglines links: http://bit.ly/8mF89c #scriptchat -3:31 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 @jeannevb I always let people know my time frame (typically 4 to 6 weeks) for follow-up. #scriptchat -3:31 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter We're talking loglines and query letters ... #scriptchat sunday. -3:30 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @lisabarrass I agree ... and you never know when your paths may cross again. The industry's a small world ... #scriptchat -3:29 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @zacsanford2 If the script is requested, what is the standard time pro co's want b4 u follow up? #scriptchat -3:29 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
johnrackham @d0kk #scriptchat and a definite and primal goal or setting." -3:29 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh RT @zacsanford2: Email. RT @jeannevb: @zacsanford2 do most companies prefer snail mail queries or emails? #scriptchat -3:29 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter RT @lisabarrass: #scriptchat - also, if you email and they knock you back after looking @ your work, send a thank you email for giving y ... -3:28 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
johnrackham @d0kk #scriptchat "You need an adjective to describe the hero, and adjective to describe the bad guy, -3:28 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb absolutely! RT @lisabarrass: #scriptchat - also, send a thank you email for giving you their time /// #scriptchat -3:28 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
eyamie @zacsanford2 How often do agents actually query prodcos? Isn't this something where noob screenwriters still do the legwork? #scriptchat -3:28 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @zacsanford2 trying to pick ur brain as much as possible so I can regurgitate ur knowledge later to tonight's peeps : ) #scriptchat -3:28 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
lisabarrass #scriptchat - also, if you email and they knock you back after looking @ your work, send a thank you email for giving you their time /// -3:27 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
teatraveler RT @robinkelly1: My blog post on pitching also includes lots of loglines links: http://bit.ly/8mF89c #scriptchat -3:27 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 And NEVER have any attachments in your query unless the requesting company says otherwise. Attachments = delete. #scriptchat -3:27 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
LisaFromNYC RT @zacsanford2: Best of all, just like a resume, make sure you fit your query letter on one page. #scriptchat -3:27 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 Email. RT @jeannevb: @zacsanford2 do most companies prefer snail mail queries or emails? #scriptchat -3:26 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb RT @zacsanford2: If u do blind query route, plz personally address email 2 each & every company, not a bulk query like many do. #scriptchat -3:26 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
eyamie @d0kk Like The Bible, Save The Cat is a must-read, but you don't need to be devout #scriptchat -3:26 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter Cool, thanks Robin! RT @robinkelly1 My blog post on pitching also includes lots of loglines links: http://bit.ly/8mF89c #scriptchat -3:26 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @DreamsGrafter For scripts 1 page, for novels a teeny bit longer. Most dont have time to read more #scriptchat -3:26 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb thanks! RT @robinkelly1: My blog post on pitching also includes lots of loglines links: http://bit.ly/8mF89c #scriptchat -3:26 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
johnrackham @d0kk There's an entire chapter on it #scriptchat But I'll have a go. -3:25 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 If you do the blind query route, please personally address the email to each and every company, not a bulk query like many do. #scriptchat -3:25 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @zacsanford2 do most companies prefer snail mail queries or emails? #scriptchat -3:25 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @jeannevb @zacsanford2 Selling yourself/team then the script :) #scriptchat -3:25 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
d0kk @johnrackham do tell... or are you recommending that we buy the book for this nugget? : ) #scriptchat -3:25 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb RT @zacsanford2: Best of all, just like a resume, make sure you fit your query letter on one page. #scriptchat -3:25 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @PennyAsh re synopsis on a query letter? ... am thinking 1 - 2 pages might be a bit long. #scriptchat (but i haven't had much exp. w/ them) -3:25 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
robinkelly1 My blog post on pitching also includes lots of loglines links: http://bit.ly/8mF89c #scriptchat -3:25 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 Best of all, just like a resume, make sure you fit your query letter on one page. #scriptchat -3:24 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @zacsanford2 what is the length of a query u want popping up on ur email? #scriptchat -3:24 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @zacsanford2 Excellent, sell yourself, then sell the script #scriptchat -3:23 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
eyamie @DreamsGrafter For a query letter, I'd go with one pgh, hopefully 3-4 sentences. After a logline #scriptchat -3:23 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @eyamie Cool, that's what I aim for too. #scriptchat -3:23 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @DreamsGrafter I'd say 1-2 pages at most #scriptchat -3:23 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @zacsanford2 @PennyAsh Ive pitched script #1 & lead w how we got the idea & y we're qualified to write it best #scriptchat -3:23 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter RT @jeannevb: WRiter's Digest has a book out on querying. My guess is it wld apply to screenwriting too: http://bit.ly/7tD3u3 #scriptchat -3:23 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @eyamie their attention - in an instant ... #scriptchat ... in other words, i don't want to give them a chance to let their minds wander. -3:22 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 Yes any publishing in any field should be mentioned. RT @PennyAsh: @zacsanford2 So stuff like being published, etc would help #scriptchat -3:22 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @eyamie and what the trailer wld look like... bc that is just a pitch to the masses... same thing #scriptchat -3:22 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @eyamie How long is your synopsis? I always think whoever is reading it - has read so many ... so you've just got to grab ... #scriptchat -3:22 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @zacsanford2 So stuff like being published, etc would help #scriptchat -3:21 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb WRiter's Digest has a book out on querying. My guess is it wld apply to screenwriting too: http://bit.ly/7tD3u3 #scriptchat -3:21 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @lisabarrass Totally ... but loglines also help focus your story I find ... what is the story really about? #scriptchat -3:20 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
eyamie @DreamsGrafter I try to capture three acts in the synopsis, but I'm also thinking about what the commercial would sound like #scriptchat -3:20 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
lisabarrass #scriptchat - people that write those few lines in tv listings - they nail loglines lol n -3:19 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @DreamsGrafter yep. Need to show them its worth 2 hrs of their time to read! #scriptchat -3:19 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 @PennyAsh If this is your 1st script and no credentials/awards put in something else to sell yourself as a writer in any field. #scriptchat -3:19 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @jeannevb Agreed. Conflict/emotion must be clear in the logline ... i.e. where is the drama going to come from ... #scriptchat -3:18 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 @eyamie No problem at all. We're killing about half our development slate so I'll need new projects to develop. #scriptchat -3:18 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @zacsanford2 And what if it's your first script and no credentials? #scriptchat -3:18 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb RT @johnrackham: Blake Snyder gave the best logline advice Ive seen in Save the Cat! #scriptchat -3:18 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb RT @zacsanford2: Also, if u have a twist in ending of ur script, put that in your synopsis!!! Dont hold back big parts of script #scriptchat -3:18 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
teatraveler RT @zacsanford's #scriptchat offer: http://bit.ly/4MP2Ie - it's on now ... -3:17 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter RT @johnrackham Blake Snyder gave the best logline advice I've seen in Save the Cat! #scriptchat -3:17 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
johnrackham Blake Snyder gave the best logline advice I've seen in Save the Cat! #scriptchat -3:17 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
lisabarrass @DreamsGrafter #scriptchat - loglines are killers!!! -3:17 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter Loglines: the story and main character has to be self-evident in the logline ... what is this idea about? #scriptchat -3:17 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 Also, if you have a twist in the ending of your script, put that in your synopsis!!! You can't hold back the big parts of script #scriptchat -3:16 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb in my loglines, I try to not only grab the producer w a hook, but show the potential for conflict/emotion in the script #scriptchat -3:16 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter RT @jeannevb: let's talk loglines then... what makes a great one? Any tips? #scriptchat -3:16 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
eyamie @zacsanford2 Hey thanks for the query opportunity btw. Hope you get something really good. #scriptchat -3:15 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
lisabarrass #scriptchat - I think what's really important is that your belief in your concept shines through the pitch/query letter. -3:15 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @lisabarrass awesome. my course director mentioned that once u've got a relationship, u can keep pitching ideas #scriptchat -3:15 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb great point! RT @zacsanford2: Also, if youre sending me a query of a comedy, you better make me laugh somewhere in your query. #scriptchat -3:15 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb let's talk loglines then... what makes a great one? Any tips? #scriptchat -3:15 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 Also, if you're sending me a query of a comedy, you better make me laugh somewhere in your query. Then again, they may b just me #scriptchat -3:14 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @Mockwriter Come join #scriptchat and take advantage of @zacsanford's #scriptchat offer: http://bit.ly/4MP2Ie - it's on now ... -3:14 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb that says it all! RT @zacsanford2: Credentials/Awards, Great Logline & short synopsis. #scriptchat -3:14 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb RT @zacsanford2: Credentials/Awards, Great Logline & short synopsis. RT @jeannevb:as a producer, what do u like to c in a query? #scriptchat -3:13 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @eyamie for me, I lead w why I'M the one who is qualified to write this script #scriptchat -3:13 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
lisabarrass @DreamsGrafter #scriptchat - Getting through to the final 20 of the Red Planet Prize was the door opener - direct line lol :) -3:13 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @yingandyang then u need to see this #scriptchat opportunity! http://bit.ly/185tzs -3:12 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 Credentials/Awards, Great Logline & short synopsis. RT @jeannevb: @zacsanford2 as a producer, what do u like to see in a query? #scriptchat -3:12 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yingandyang @jeannevb thanks!, I'm a first time screenwriter, just finished a first draft and looking to get it out there! #scriptchat -3:12 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
eyamie @jeannevb But what's important and what's not? I've read only certain achievements are worth mentioning #scriptchat -3:11 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @jeannevb Then the ask for the full #scriptchat -3:11 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @lisabarrass Ahhh, cool ... so your email got you the meeting? #scriptchat ... how much info did you put into it? #scriptchat -3:11 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @jeannevb A lot, most, publishers want a query 1st with a synopsis, then they might request 1st - 3rd chapters, if they like it #scriptchat -3:11 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 Exactly, give me a reason ASAP to read your script. RT @jeannevb: @eyamie credentials r important, for sure. Id lead w them. #scriptchat -3:11 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
Ludovicaa #scriptchat Im watching -3:11 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @zacsanford2 as a producer, what do i like to see in a query? #scriptchat -3:11 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter Pssst, Euro #scriptchat's on ... XFactor isn't good for your ears ... but #scriptchat can help your writing career ... ;) -3:10 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @zacsanford2 yeah! Hi Zac. Euro has small crowd today bc of finale of Xfactor (their Am Idol) #scriptchat -3:10 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 I'm working right now, but I'll try to chime in the best I can. #scriptchat -3:10 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
lisabarrass @DreamsGrafter #scriptchat - Simon's was face to face meeting which followed an initial email -3:10 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @eyamie credentials r important, for sure. I'd lead w them... then right into the hook (logline) #scriptchat -3:10 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @yingandyang welcome! we're talking queries/loglines #scriptchat -3:09 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
zacsanford2 Hello everybody... sorry I'm a little late. #scriptchat -3:09 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @jeannevb I let it come up in the convo then give a little description of the project :) has worked so far #scriptchat -3:09 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @PennyAsh and if they want it, they'll send a release & u can then email script #scriptchat -3:09 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @lisabarrass On paper? If so, how much info. did you give? 1 page? A logline? ... How much did Simon want? #scriptchat -3:09 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
yingandyang Hi, just following at the moment, I'm intrigued! #scriptchat -3:08 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @filmutopia take care, Clive. Hope u feel better quick #scriptchat -3:08 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @PennyAsh really the only "submission guidelines" in film is NOT to send unsolitcited script. Query/pitch first #scriptchat -3:08 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @johnrackham Everything is worthwhile :) #scriptchat -3:07 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @johnrackham Me neither. I'm wondering if it's a US thing ... and if it's practice in the UK. #scriptchat -3:07 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
eyamie What about writing credentials in the query letter? #scriptchat -3:07 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
filmutopia #scriptchat - sorry guys, I've got a bad cold. I'm no use to you tonight. see you next week -3:07 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @johnrackham haha... I love u, John : ) #scriptchat -3:07 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @zacsanford... r u coming to EURO chat... it's on NOW #scriptchat -3:07 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @jeannevb Mostly what I did was research publishers then follow their submission guidelines #scriptchat -3:07 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
johnrackham @DreamsGrafter I'd never heard of a query letter before this week. #scriptchat -3:06 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @PennyAsh haha... IM chat pitch... now that's a topic! #scriptchat -3:06 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @johnrackham Re the projects you're developing, have you had to pitch them on paper? #scriptchat -3:06 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb then of course, ask if they want to see it & have my contact info #scriptchat -3:06 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb I lead off my query w how I got the idea or why I'M the 1 to write it... then go into the pitch & leave them hanging how it ends #scriptchat -3:06 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @jonathanbart @johnrackham @filmutopia @momentsoffilm - Hi guys, have you got any experience in sending out query letters? #scriptchat -3:05 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
johnrackham Hi everyone! Yet another #scriptchat that I'm not sure I have anything worthwhile to contribute to. -3:05 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @jeannevb Never done a live pitch unless IM chat counts lol #scriptchat -3:05 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @lisabarrass welcome... we're talking queries/loglines #scriptchat -3:05 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @lisabarrass Hi Lisa, have you written any query letters in the past? I've never thought about them before last week. #scriptchat -3:04 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb if any1 has any query info they want to share: links, books, etc... just @ me & I'll make up a resource list on our blog #scriptchat -3:04 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @julianfriedmann Hi Julian, do you respond to query letters? What do you look for in a letter? #scriptchat -3:04 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @DreamsGrafter @jeannevb I knew I'd need one eventually so any help is good help #scriptchat -3:03 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb for me, I view a query just like a live pitch #scriptchat -3:03 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
lisabarrass #scriptchat - hi there! -3:03 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb might be a small crowd due to xfactor finale, but we'll muddle through #scriptchat -3:03 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @jeannevb Just posted it ... #scriptchat -3:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb hey everyone! Welcome to EURO #scriptchat -3:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @kingisafink starting off #scriptchat w @DreamsGrafter in case EURO peeps r watching xfactor. Will comment on ur blog 4 sure :) -3:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
teatraveler @DreamsGrafter I do not watch television, so do not know what xfactor is. Guess I'm missing out. #scriptchat -3:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter @jeannevb @PennyAsh - Have never throught about query letters until @zacsanford's #scriptchat offer. -3:02 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
PennyAsh @jeannevb Yep exactly #scriptchat -3:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter Today's #Scriptchat topic will be Loglines, one sheets, queries...how to gain the interest of producer/agent? -3:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
jeannevb @PennyAsh i wld assume they're very similar. A pitch is a pitch : ) #scriptchat -3:01 PM Dec 13th, 2009
  
DreamsGrafter EURO #SCRIPTCHAT O'CLOCK! -3:00 PM Dec 13th, 2009

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